tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23774671.post7567422773781291473..comments2023-07-20T08:35:44.681-07:00Comments on A person named Eunice: Poetry: Approaching the VeilDarlenehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02390374931911258822noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23774671.post-13109362470916874312007-09-26T20:35:00.000-07:002007-09-26T20:35:00.000-07:00Thanks, Emily.Well, for one thing, the metaphors g...Thanks, Emily.<BR/><BR/>Well, for one thing, the metaphors get a little mixed up and are pushed a little too far at times. ("Midwives to the quickening"?)<BR/><BR/>I was trying so hard to be poetic that I think I fell off the side at times.Darlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02390374931911258822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23774671.post-64660180222647684112007-09-24T12:16:00.000-07:002007-09-24T12:16:00.000-07:00I love this. You sent me a copy, but I think the e...I love this. You sent me a copy, but I think the end is different. Now I will have to check. Hope to see more!Jennifer B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/18027072144184440842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23774671.post-90275018146101763252007-09-22T09:30:00.000-07:002007-09-22T09:30:00.000-07:00Wow. So, I'm curious: what flaws do you see in it...Wow. <BR/><BR/>So, I'm curious: what flaws do you see in it now? Because I'm not seeing any... How do you analyze your own work?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com